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| need you opinion on my poem (dont worry its short!) |
created @ 01/8/2007 02:21 am |
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K so Im a total insomniac and I dont know what sleep is. Sooo I get a brain wave idea to write. I havent written in years although I used to dailey. So I wrote this poem. Tell me what you think. It is good or just the rantings of a tired chick that should be sleeping.
As I lie here awake in the dark, many thoughts run through my head. An aching pit of emptyness engulfs me. I am so alone.
There is no one to hold, no one to share my heart. no one to fill the void. I am so alone.
You used to lie with me, there was a glimmer of light. We laughed and shared and loved. But now I am so alone.
You were taken so swiftly, no warning or goodbyes. My love is gone away now. I am so alone. |
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